I liked THis'un

I really Liked this Flash, The Style Is Great, And...It's just all round, Fun ?
Very Well Done Here, YOu Made a good job.
Nic Voice acting aswell :P

Just some Little Pointers

Ok, Just a little helpful Critique here...
erm,
The Text can get a bit boring waiting for it to move onto the next sentance, too much time has been given for reading.

Also The Backgrounds are a bit too Pixelised in some places...Just a bit, meh..

Erm, last bit, The Egg part was a bit Frustrating, Maybe you could slow it down seen as this part is pretty early in the game where you are only just learning the basics.
But yah, S'a Very Good Game and I'd Like to see it when it's Finished. GOod luck